The Gift. #FridayFotoFiction

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Going through the dresses at the fabric inn

Looking for some clothes for my friend Robin

You know that girl who made my husband smile,

That time we went to the bar nearby.

She laughed at his jokes and gave his hair some strokes,

That night didn’t end until the next day broke.

He talked about her then day and night,

As if she was the princess and he was her knight.

I did get a little jealous, but that was all for nought,

I thought the right way to do this would be a gift and a little talk.

Should I go for denim or should I go for linen?

I’m looking for the dress that I’m gonna kill her in. 🙂


sukrisblog · November 3, 2017 at 9:31 AM

Super rhyming like post. Loved it.

Sunitagupta · November 3, 2017 at 10:51 AM

O boy , your tales are getting sharper.

Nayantara Hegde · November 3, 2017 at 3:23 PM

Brilliant interpretation. Loved the idea that its a poem.. makes it almost less harsh and mean.

    knightofsteel · November 3, 2017 at 9:49 PM

    Poetry has a knack of making terrible things seem beautiful

Akshata Ram · November 4, 2017 at 2:14 AM

Loved it! Of cos she should kill her. Go for it

    knightofsteel · November 4, 2017 at 2:19 AM

    Few things better than a vengeful wife.

Anagha Yatin (@anagha_yatin) · November 4, 2017 at 2:59 AM

Wish she gets the desired look to kill HIM than HER… Beautifully worded sinister thoughts!!!

    knightofsteel · November 4, 2017 at 3:00 AM

    Thank you! Who knows she might kill him next. No one messes with her.

Meha Sharma · November 4, 2017 at 5:11 AM

Awesome!! Loved the verse 🙂

Namratha · November 4, 2017 at 12:12 PM

You killed it! Lovely(not so lovely) little poem there

    knightofsteel · November 4, 2017 at 12:12 PM

    Thank you!☺️ It was lovely on her part to do anything it takes to protect her love

Samantha Fors · November 4, 2017 at 11:50 PM

Love this!!!!!

opinionatedmua · November 6, 2017 at 10:46 PM

The need to handle it well. 🙂 Didn’t expect the kill in the end. 🙂

Mayuri6 · November 7, 2017 at 12:46 AM

Hahahahah! What an epic end! Loved this!
Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

    knightofsteel · November 7, 2017 at 1:59 AM

    Thank you for such amazing prompts ☺️

Tina Basu · November 9, 2017 at 5:48 AM

Aha, kill her with her sassiness! I like! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.

Varsh · November 9, 2017 at 8:58 AM

For such a scary plan she is deceivingly composed. Loved the rhyme and the story. 😁

    knightofsteel · November 9, 2017 at 10:54 AM

    Even scarier is the fact that she was going to go to that lady’s home, gift her the dress, ask her to try it and then kill her.

rashimital · November 9, 2017 at 7:54 PM

Wow. This was a great take. Loved the poetic flow. And the best part, the ending. Throughout the post I thought maybe it has an ending like ‘Stepmom’ (Hollywood movie). But the end was super. Amazing take on the prompt. 🙂

    knightofsteel · November 9, 2017 at 10:55 AM

    The best ending is the one we don’t see coming☺️

      rashimital · November 10, 2017 at 7:56 AM

      Agree again!

Keerthi Vydyula · November 10, 2017 at 1:33 PM

For me the interesting part was he actually talking about the other women with his wife. That’s some honesty and bravery he showed here! How often do we find such honest men. Wrong yet honest though 😛

    knightofsteel · November 10, 2017 at 1:34 PM

    Haha, he must have been one courageous yet unethical man to flirt with other women while being married.

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