The Gift. #FridayFotoFiction


Going through the dresses at the fabric inn

Looking for some clothes for my friend Robin

You know that girl who made my husband smile,

That time we went to the bar nearby.

She laughed at his jokes and gave his hair some strokes,

That night didn’t end until the next day broke.

He talked about her then day and night,

As if she was the princess and he was her knight.

I did get a little jealous, but that was all for nought,

I thought the right way to do this would be a gift and a little talk.

Should I go for denim or should I go for linen?

I’m looking for the dress that I’m gonna kill her in. πŸ™‚

27 Replies to “The Gift. #FridayFotoFiction”

  1. Wow. This was a great take. Loved the poetic flow. And the best part, the ending. Throughout the post I thought maybe it has an ending like β€˜Stepmom’ (Hollywood movie). But the end was super. Amazing take on the prompt. πŸ™‚

  2. For me the interesting part was he actually talking about the other women with his wife. That’s some honesty and bravery he showed here! How often do we find such honest men. Wrong yet honest though πŸ˜›

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